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OH NOES! (part 1)

October 12th, 2014, 5:15 pm

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OH NOES!
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Reply gsman243, October 12th, 2014, 5:18 pm

You should improve.

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:51 pm

@gsman243: So should you.

Reply Spar Elric, October 13th, 2014, 12:58 am

What is even..? I don't..


What?

Reply lennyandmowmow, October 17th, 2014, 7:58 pm

@Spar Elric: Shut up

Reply Spar Elric, October 18th, 2014, 12:42 pm

@lennyandmowmow: No. I am a comic admin too. Show some fucking respect.

Reply Cassiethehedgehog, October 18th, 2014, 12:55 pm

@lennyandmowmow: dont u DARE tell spar to shut up!!! she is awesome!!! D=<

Reply Spar Elric, October 18th, 2014, 2:33 pm

@Cassiethehedgehog: I don't need help defending myself.

Reply Cassiethehedgehog, October 20th, 2014, 8:36 pm

@Spar Elric: ok sorry

Reply Spar Elric, October 23rd, 2014, 11:37 pm

@Cassiethehedgehog: It's nice that you think so highly of me, but I'm perfectly able to defend myself. ^^;

Reply Mayro, November 27th, 2014, 10:04 am

@Spar Elric: I TINK SPAER ELREIC IZ ASOM TOOH

Reply Spar Elric, December 26th, 2014, 10:48 pm

@Mayro: Thanks.. XD

Reply Mayro, November 27th, 2014, 10:06 am

@lennyandmowmow: F*** U LITL A**HOLE

Reply Super Froakie 64 DS, December 24th, 2014, 9:07 pm

@Mayro: MAYRO I LUF U MARI MI

Reply Shadee, June 6th, 2016, 3:19 pm

@Super Froakie 64 DS: welcome

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:55 pm

@Spar Elric: I'm confused too.

Reply Cassiethehedgehog, October 18th, 2014, 12:54 pm

this isnt great, but i bet if u listen to the advise everyone gives u, it will get better.

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:45 pm

@Cassiethehedgehog: Doubt he will, but I'll try to be helpful for once.

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:43 pm

Now I understand you're young and still learning, so I'll be nice for once.

ONLY ONCE!

This needs a LOT of work to actually be a GOOD comic strip.

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Lesson one: Context and story.

We don't know what's going on and why. This is not a good thing if you want to get people interested in your comic to begin with. We need dialog from the characters. As well as some form of back-story.

Such as: WHY is the main character fighting (if what we see here can even be called that) with Shadow the Hedgehog?

We can't really get into your story if you don't even provide it to begin with!

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Lesson two: Pleasing visuals.

This made my eyes bleed. Profusely!

I'm not expecting a child to be a super-fantastical-artist, don't get me wrong, but I KNOW there are better images of Shadow the Hedgehog and Meta-Knight out there that can be used for this sort of thing!

At least, something less blurry and not so crappily painted over! It's not that hard to find "color me in" pages on Google, kid.

I'd also like to add that the panel sizes are kind of weird and the separation borders for each one are hard to see. All you need is a nice big black line for those and boom. Done.

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Hopefully you won't ignore this like your whiner of an older brother tends to do and actually read what I wrote here. Even though it is a tad long.

Reply lennyandmowmow, October 20th, 2014, 10:09 am

@MarioMustang: I have not been on paint for years so i don't remember how to do stuff on it and my hand hurts when i try drawing and i have a bad life but none of you care! We Try okay???

Reply Josephk, October 20th, 2014, 1:03 pm

@lennyandmowmow: We don't care about you even though we tried to help you? What's the logic in that?

Also define your bad life. I live in a place where being creative/unique is a joke. Everyone tries to take the ideas of others. Mechanics, technicians, etc breaks your stuff so they can come back and take more of your money. Power outages is almost a normalcy here. Every kid's dream is to be a criminal or smoke weed. And no one gives a crap about how fragile your stuff is.

Yet you don't see me complaining about it.

Reply MarioMustang, October 20th, 2014, 8:40 pm

@lennyandmowmow: You're just making excuses now. Much like how your brother does. You sure you're not just another account of his? Sure would explain a lot.

P.S. No one on the Internet gives two shits about your life. NO. ONE!

P.P.S. Try harder. Make your hands fucking BLEED if necessary!

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:51 pm

@Blackhunter1000: Agreed.

Reply Mayro, November 27th, 2014, 10:01 am

@MarioMustang: YOA AALL SHOOD IMPROV

Reply MarioMustang, October 18th, 2014, 1:51 pm

@lennyandmowmow: It's a mask, not a hat.

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