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Custom Kirby Sprites

June 1st, 2014, 8:29 am

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HADOUKEN!!! SHORYUKEN!!!
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Reply gsman243, June 1st, 2014, 8:29 am

I think I should use my custom sprites for a webcomic.

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User's Comments:

Reply GokentoPower, June 1st, 2014, 8:42 am

@gsman243: dat sword kirby tho'

My opinion:
Power Ups are well made but, mouth is a little...
well 'y know.
Never draw mouthes and stuff with pencil, use teh lines.

Reply nyancat6650, June 1st, 2014, 9:37 am

no

Reply kmarwx, June 1st, 2014, 1:43 pm

@gsman243:

You should most definitely not use your custom sprites for a webcomic

Reply TatzuiDubby, June 2nd, 2014, 7:53 pm

Im sorry, but it looks like a pink pac man.
Just say'n

Reply gsman243, June 3rd, 2014, 6:08 am

I kinda meant to do that, but only for the inhaling sprites.

Reply TatzuiDubby, June 3rd, 2014, 8:20 am

@gsman243: Oh ok

Reply Blue Kirby the l33t, June 3rd, 2014, 1:27 pm

@gsman243: Okay, I THINK I can criticize without sounding like a jerk. Here goes: In most sprites, the shading is focused at the bottom of the sprite instead of off to the side. There CAN be shading on the side, but the majority of it should be on the bottom. Next: The mouth. When Kirby is standing still and walking, his mouth seems to be a bit too squiggly. Instead of drawing the whole mouth at once, make it a pixel at a time for a nice, straight, look.The mouth looks a bit too square on his shooting an air puff sprite, so I would make it rounder. Lastly, I noticed that the shading is too straight. I recommend making them curve a bit more. Hope this helps! ^.^

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