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Custom Meta Knight Sprites

May 31st, 2014, 8:47 am

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It's good! Riiight?
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Author's Comments:

Reply gsman243, May 31st, 2014, 8:47 am

Okay. Kinda easy.

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User's Comments:

Reply MonkeysUncle, May 31st, 2014, 8:58 am

Sword is too bright, no shading, outline the sword, cape is stiff (Make it more flowy) some of the black outlines end up combining and looking bad (like on the mask) fix your stuff before you move on to another one. also, experiment with shading.

Reply gsman243, May 31st, 2014, 9:04 am

It looks fine to me.

Reply hitkid96fan, May 31st, 2014, 9:10 am

Have you considered others? You still have a lot to improve so stay with simple 8-bit stuff to learn the basics like outlines, shading, etc.

Reply kmarwx, May 31st, 2014, 2:33 pm

@gsman243:

Just because it looks fine to you doesn't mean it looks good. Since you created it, I would assume you're already heavily biased towards it, so your opinion of it is invalid. It's okay for you to think it looks good, but what you really want is the opinion of those who haven't seen it so you actually know how to improve. There's a difference between being proud of something and writing off the comments of those who dislike it.

As for the sprite itself, MonkeysUncle hits it spot on. The sword needs an outline, the outlines need to be touched up, and the cape needs fixing. In addition, I would recommend sizing both this and your Dedede sprite up a bit more so it's easier to see the detail.

Reply Sprite_Reviewer, May 31st, 2014, 3:00 pm

Okay gsman i've been seeing you around here for quite awhile and i'm going to ask you to stop.
Listen to the fucking criticism.

There are too many Jagged Edges 1 foot is larger then the other, the cape looks off... for some reason theres this gray thing on the top of his head.
the Sword is too bright.
Fix it, and stop being a Prick.

Reply gsman243, May 31st, 2014, 3:12 pm

Pay attention to the artwork, guy who was probable hacked!

Reply kmarwx, May 31st, 2014, 3:14 pm

@gsman243:

Dude, he is paying attention to the artwork. And he's saying it looks like shit. I agree. You need to touch your stuff up more before you release it out to us, and for the love of god take criticism and don't just ignore us.

And I can confidently say he was not hacked. If you haven't noticed, SR is pretty blunt with everyone.

Reply hitkid96fan, May 31st, 2014, 3:15 pm

@gsman243: Now you are just ignoring us all, either you shape up or be the way you are right now. I recommend not to do advanced sprites and try to improve on simpler stuff, but it seems you are just ignore this like everything else.

Also Sprite_Reviewer was never hacked, you keep mistaking him for Red Haired Bastard.

Reply Sprite_Reviewer, May 31st, 2014, 3:26 pm

@gsman243: OHSHI- HE FIGURED ME OUTTTTTT!

.......But really. We're both the same people.

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